Hah! I really liked it. There's nowhere near enough machinima done in the Doom engine so it's always nice to see something new.
I liked the humour and I appreciated the fact that you didn't go too 'crazy and zany' shouting and screaming like so many 'comedy' videos found on Youtube.
Some of your English was a bit off. I'm not sure if that was a deliberate choice to add to the home-made feel or not. Anyway, if you'd like some help clearing up some of the grammar or streamlining some of the prose I'd love to help.
PS: Poo-poo to you Revilution! I like the cars. There was certainly no mistaking what engine the film was made in...
