corysykes wrote:now way back ages ago i had an idea of making action doom 2 i got permission and everything ready but no one would help me and they just ranted and it relly pissed me off but then i said fark it so i started making it all on my own i made custion weapons and every thing sept not graphics and im going to post a few screenies of it here and tell me if you like it and please DONT rant this time i mean it

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1) Spelling, grammar and punctuation are your friends; they make it much easier for us to understand you. The easier it is for us to understand you, the more likely it is that you'll get contructive comments from us. As has been pointed out to you before, on-line dictionaries exist, so there's no excuse for poor spelling. Grammar and punctuation will break your message down into the separate concepts that the rest of the English-speaking world call "sentences". This simple step will garner you much-needed respect on this forum.
There is no excuse for making your posts as hard to read as they are. As long as they're this bad, you'll get little or no respect here.
2) Why do you call this "Action Doom 2". If you use this name, people will, quite rightly, expect something like the original, but better. If you can't deliver, all you'll get will be ridicule. Riding on the reputation of another well-known release is risky; the name will give you attention, but the expectations are so much higher.
3) I question your use of the word "ranted". To quote the Spaniard, "I don't think this word means what you think it means." Frankly, if anyone is ranting it's you.
4) I'm sorry, but I have to agree with those who've already posted. The uniform lighting is, well, a bit boring. In the first shot you do have some interesting architecture, but the green tech texture showing through the walls looks as though it doesn't belong there. In the third shot the marble top of the green crates looks bizarre, as Enjay has pointed out, and the bright red skybox looks plain wrong.
5) Lastly, please don't tell us how to respond to your request for comments. You've come back to us, as we asked you previously, with screen-shots. We've commented on them. If you don't like criticism, either deal with it, or go somewhere else. Don't get all pissy with us.