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Viscra Maelstrom wrote:does this song sound okay? i feel there's something about it that's just off and should be changed, but i dunno what.

A fingered/picked bass would be better.

i actually quite like the slap bass myself, but the other instruments aren't a bad idea. i could change it if more people agree with it.

i was moreso referring to the sound that occurs at around 2:30. some friends i've showed this track to doesn't seem to be entirely fond of the sound that happens there, but i like it. so i wanted some advice on what would need changing here.

Slap doesn't fit the atmosphere imo. The 2:30 sound was... bad. :/

well then, i made a different version of the same song. slap bass is now picked, 2:30 sound is now removed completely from the song, and probably some other small changes.

edit: changed the song to the right fucking one.

The bass is still slap.

no? it's... wait. fuck me, i'm an idiot, it's the SAME SONG. HERE'S the new version.

Good job. The bass fits in better with everything else now. The rhythm in the intro is interesting, and the ambient noise that kicks off after is really creepy imo. You made a good blend of interest, good sound and creepiness.

i actually liked the slap bass and weird sound myself, but i guess it's good to get a perspective on things. i DID feel something sounded wrong with the song, so it's only good to get confirmed on exactly what sounded wrong. and i do have the original cut left anyway, so it's not all bad.

Damn nice song! Sounds really good.

So, I wrote some more fantasy fiction. Even if nobody has any sort of feedback for me, I suppose I wouldn't mind some acknowledgement that people actually read these things.

After i read, good stuff. No need to be nitpicky or feedbacky.
Anyway would be great if someone tributes some concept arts for it.

Yeah, it was a nice read... I can't into English all that well, so I can't post feed back that's meaningful.


On topic: Progress has been slow, but I am slowly reaching the point where all the non-special weapons are done and I only have two normal enemies and the bosses to do.

Dat flash anget tho

wildweasel wrote:So, I wrote some more fantasy fiction. Even if nobody has any sort of feedback for me, I suppose I wouldn't mind some acknowledgement that people actually read these things.

"But…but I’m not lying…" The idea of this being the only place she can call home, and that she is about to be thrown out of it, puts Tiva on the verge of crying She stutters out past the verge of tears.

Ah, ah, ah! Show, don't tell!

Balancing it is a bitchhhh.
otherwise pretty gud would read more

Spoiler:

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https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/141 ... /OTTFX.wad
I've been messing with an Over the top special effects wad. At the moment it's compatible with anything that doesn't replace the bullet puffs or blood. Let me know what you think!