Jinal wrote:fridgedJinal wrote:Typical White Male story there.DoomNukem wrote:
"My wife and unborn child has been killed (fridged) and I must avenge their deaths because dead women (read: Violence against Women) drive my story...." like we seen a millions times before....
Oh look, I'm fucking fridged, I'm a goddamn fridge call help!, It's Frigid, dick.
not that its any of your business but I do have a girlfriend and she's very supportive of my work.
for fucks sake internet.
Dead women do not drive the story, one woman dies, his wife, but if you were actually paying attention, you'd know he's a genetically engineered super soldier in a secret UN taskforce during the post apocalypse who has fallen from grace.
Yes it is a typical white male story, the character is a typical white male (see the pictures on the first page). it was supposed to be fun and childish, and I hope the adition of a cheesey stereotypically black best friend character boils your politically correct blood. This is for a uni-project I presented the animatic
Spoiler:along with other material to my post graduate class
and it was well received with laughter, which exactly what was intended.
I'm not sexist, that voice is placeholder if that's what you meant, I cant speak in a girls voice but that's getting sorted (edit: um, that sounded weird). if you meant her death it's a basic plot device, deal with it.
And everytime someone calls out something as sexist or "Violence against Women" for trivial shit such as this you damage the Intergrity of the arguement and make legitimate claims less valid.
your probably not going to read all this, you didn't structure an arguement nor did you explain why you feel the way you do, clear flamebaiting, please leave and don't let the door hit you on your way out.
You are correct, there was to be no depth, it's a cheesey parody of action films so I went for a classic simple revenge theme, this isnt the count of montechristo. the childish dialogue was indeed intended. granted my placeholder voice acting is awful I just handed the script to marty kirra the other day as he will be taking care of the voices.Triple S wrote:..Oh, and it was pretty clear to me that the story video thing wasn't intended to be super serious and deep. Try not to read into it too much, lest you be schooled by those who are far better at it than yourself.
Thankyou hahaha, again it was placeholder but definitely pulled a few laughs, I will probably use one of the gun sounds form trailblazer when I get to it.Mav3rick wrote:the best part of the video is the "boom" of the gun XD nice work and is good that the mod have a history