Oh, erm. Sorries. Just really didn't have any other things handy. (I don't exactly have a stash of other people's stuff.
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Probably figures why I should probably take care while doing things tired.
But the biggie really is that the gun is lacking severely in looks. Because it looks like it's the bare shape of a gun - without any definite shape so to say.
I mean the first thing that would probably improve the looks of it is if you replaced those lines along the top of the back of the gun (behind the sights) with a inward going bevel.
I did want to do so in this little example, but it got out of control pretty badly:
Very wobbly and not good at all - absolutely. But I never said I was good at this.
So to put it straight what I ended up doing (and I suck badly at gun design, so don't take it as solid advice) is adding a whole bunch of sharp shapes for no discernible reason. Other than making it look less like a basic shape.
I kind of tried to illustrate what the hell is going on here, but I'm not sure if it's decipherable (it certainly requires careful inspection);
Some simple changes would be making the part that's being held with the left hand rounded at the bottom (You don't want the sharp edges to cut your hand in the recoil, do you now!), and the clip seems a bit too wide.
Though the latter is excusable by saying that it's some big battery of some sorts, but the corners could still be rounded, even if just slightly.
Now pardon me, I think I should go snoozing.