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Need opinions on new monster

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I working on the "Ignist" for DE, it basicaly replaces the Revevant for Episode 3, since I dont want some techno-monsters in the environment. This monster is basically a burning charred skeleton (you may need to zoom in to see the shading) that shoots homing burning skull projectiles or smacks up close. I'm not sure if i should keep the current design or not. Here's a sprite from it.

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Any suggestions on it? I was originally gonna make it some Lava-golem like monster. But i htink i'm gonna save that for the mancubus replacements.
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Post by Virtue »

perfect! Love the flaming effect, i can see this animating really well too
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Post by Ryan Cordell »

Sexy, but make the yellow flames not stick out as much. Kinda distracting.
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Post by NiGHTMARE »

That looks excellent! Is it completely from scratch, or based on some existing sprite?
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Post by Ryan Cordell »

From what I gather, I'm thinking it's a heavily modified Archvile base.
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Post by XutaWoo »

Holy! That sprite is awesome, though you should tone down the fire.
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Post by Dutch Devil »

Very sweet I like it looks like its based on the Revenant I think the fire on its hands look cool.
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Post by Medricel »

It's good, but do you think it might be possible to go with something more like a clawed hoof instead of the spindly toes it has now? The way they look (especially when on the floor) is very odd.
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Post by Kajiotaku »

Clawed hoof is good. Maybe a bit more "lanky" kinda. Just a bit.
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Post by Amuscaria »

Blade Nightflame wrote:From what I gather, I'm thinking it's a heavily modified Archvile base.
Its drawn from scratch. I dont wanna end up with a bunch of edits. I think 1 edit of each doom monster is plenty.

Hm, i agree. I need to tone down the yellow a bit.
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Post by Kirby »

Damn, that looks MIGHTY fine if I do say so myself! Stick with it! :D
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Post by Matt »

Pretty damn cool.

I think the horns and shoulder spikes are a bit much, though... it's way creepier if it looks more human.
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Post by Travis »

Shinjanji wrote:It's good, but do you think it might be possible to go with something more like a clawed hoof instead of the spindly toes it has now? The way they look (especially when on the floor) is very odd.
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Post by Phobus »

This original sprite work is a lot more like what I'd hope to see from a sprite-maker of Eriance's talent. Very good, but yeah, the yellow is a little much... tone it down... perhaps make it more orange.
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Post by Enjay »

This is a really good looking sprite.

Yellows and oranges are limited in the Doom palette, so there won't be much to play with and keep it looking good but the yellow is a bit stark ATM.

I like the horns and shoulder spikes. To me, that's a hell-beast and I see no reason why it needs to be more human. Something like that would be far more scary than a near-human IMO.

As for the feet, I dunno. I like the spindly toes. I think they're kind of creepy. Not sure how well hooves would look on this one.

Anyway, great stuff Eriance, I look forward to seeing this one in action.
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