Well, the font color certainly didn't work as the original, and the HUD itself is slightly off (why change the HEADSUP line to -55 instead of -54?).
I've decided to make my own tweaks to resemble the original as much as possible, and I believe that it is perfect.
Without AtM mugshot
With AtM mugshot
With no mugshot at all
Comparisons of the original Accessories to Murder HUD and this version can be found here, if you really need to see.