Judge My map!

[meowmeowrulez123123]

So I want to make a Retro Fps in the Doom engine and in order to get used and to get good at the engine I wanted to make some vanilla maps. Anyway the reason I posted this is because I want some criticisms for my map and thought this would be a good place to post it, Now this is my first actual map so go easy on me but I do want some actual criticism: The good and the bad (and the ugly). So here it is (sorry for the stupid pun)

[yum13241]

So I want to make a Retro Fps in the Doom engine and in order to get used and to get good at the engine I wanted to make some vanilla maps. Anyway the reason I posted this is because I want some criticisms for my map and thought this would be a good place to post it, Now this is my first actual map so go easy on me but I do want some actual criticism: The good and the bad (and the ugly). So here it is (sorry for the stupid pun)

It's cool concept, but I don't feel like it lives up to it's name. Putting a roof over the whole thing would make it creepier, and there are some issues which I screenshotted: https://mega.nz/file/LRoRUCpK#bQoQNEYT- ... HD_o_yKRnI. Being immediately greeted by some Pinkies makes more of a Jumpscare Castle than a haunted one. When I opened up the WAD, I thought I did something wrong with loading it, but I opened it up in SLADE3 and it turned out to replace MAP22, so i idclev'd it. I would have it replace MAP01 if I ever made a WAD that's 1 map. Just some advice. Overall, it's not BAD, but it could be better. (This got a lot longer then I thought it would be lol).

[meowmeowrulez123123]

Thanks man, I appreciate the criticism and am glad someone finally responded, I don't really know why I made it map 22 and yeah the red key thing was just me being sloppy, Thanks for the criticism. I will use your tips moving forward.

[yum13241]

Thanks man, I appreciate the criticism and am glad someone finally responded, I don't really know why I made it map 22 and yeah the red key thing was just me being sloppy, Thanks for the criticism. I will use your tips moving forward.

Sorry if I was too harsh.

[meowmeowrulez123123]

Nah you fine

[yum13241]

Nah you fine

Thanks.