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Any coment about my map?

PostPosted: Mon Mar 01, 2021 10:27 am
by Fanny Clonkinstock
I have been making doom maps for 1 year now and never have I ever posted my maps so this is the first time I post a map of mine. Before I post any real maps for people to play I would like to have some comment on my map as nobody had ever done that before. Here is a map of mine called "Cursed Tech".

download link:
http://www.mediafire.com/file/c6tpgysuu ... h.wad/file

I would like to have any comment possible and it would also be great to report any technical problems with the map itself as the best way to learn is from mistakes. Tell me if you found any secrets :D .

Re: Any coment about my map?

PostPosted: Thu Mar 04, 2021 5:56 am
by Emma Sipperridge
Here is a quick update of my map I added some slopes and added some stuff to make everything look better. I ame currently stil working on the map so it is possible for more updates to come.

Download link:
https://www.mediafire.com/file/uwhrut5v ... 2.wad/file

Re: Any coment about my map?

PostPosted: Sat Mar 20, 2021 3:50 pm
by Doomed C-thun
Okay, I just finished your map and created an account for this forum :) as amateur mapper my comment and suggestions may not be really usefull but I'll try to be the more objective as possible.

Well, the map is good, we feel you put efforts into it, kinda appreciated the teleportation effect that let you know you'll have some trouble into the hell, and the smooth end with the arch-vile fight. I just noticed some frustrating things as the first door of the level that constantly need to be opened by a switcher, maybe it was intentionnal or not, still in my opinion it was useless, and confusing things as the teleportation W1 of the right door just after the first door that I personally found a bit random.
So, finally, your map have a strong gameplay (as a regular player it was challenging but not impossible), may I suggest you to bind the difficulty settings to let the player the choice of being ass-kicked or to cook demons for lunch :D

Re: Any coment about my map?

PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2021 4:15 pm
by EricAlvin
I played through the map on "Hurt me plenty", I thought it was pretty fun! I liked how
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, I thought that was pretty cool. I found a couple secrets during my playthrough, although I only discovered
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when starting up the map a second time, with cheats, to see what I missed (Not that I think that the secret is too hidden or something, I think it's fine as is, I just missed it the first time I went through.) I didn't really encounter any technical issues (I don't think), unless
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I was afraid that the first door (the one you open with the button), wouldn't open up for me on the way back if I went through, so I kept running back to bodyblock it and prevent it from closing (In case there was a secret of some sort that required quickly running forward, pressing a button, and running back before it closed.). Overall, I really enjoyed playing this map, and I think you should release more maps. After all, if this one is anything to go by, you're great at making them!

Re: Any coment about my map?

PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2021 11:05 am
by Molly Birrynid
I am really really really really really really really greatful to you guys. Thank you for the feedback! As I said I am still working on the map and after a while I chose to change the hellish looking part of the map (that was before I got your feedback). Now that I see your feedback I feel kind of bad but I am stil proud of what I made. I also changed the difficulties as asked in the feedback Here is a update of my map I changed a lot this time exept for the beginning so you may want to skip that part (or not) . Please let me know what map is better and if I should make a new map to post.

Here are some questions about your feedback:

To Doomed c-thun:
I did not understand this part: "and confusing things as the teleportation W1 of the right door just after the first door that I personally found a bit random"

To Erick Alvin:
"I was afraid that the first door (the one you open with the button), wouldn't open up for me on the way back if I went through, so I kept running back to bodyblock it and
prevent it from closing (In case there was a secret of some sort that required quickly running forward, pressing a button, and running back before it closed.)" Should I do
something about this?



download link:

https://www.mediafire.com/file/dxzogurv ... 3.wad/file