Fan-Written Doom Screenplay

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NiteOwl
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Re: Fan-Written Doom Screenplay

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The short film or the script?

The short film starts as they've just docked on Phobos. The script starts with Doomguy arriving on Mars.
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Re: Fan-Written Doom Screenplay

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ok, I recommend you start with doomguy..... beating his commanding officer to death, as that's where doom starts.
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Re: Fan-Written Doom Screenplay

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I know about that. I've done my research. And, no. I'm not going to start there because I already have plans to reveal Doomguy's past later on in the script when it becomes thematically relevant.
So, no thanks.
And dude, no offense, but maybe you should read what I have before making recommendations on how I should change it?

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