The WIP Thread

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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby Undead » Mon Nov 24, 2014 2:50 pm

Viscra Maelstrom wrote:does this song sound okay? i feel there's something about it that's just off and should be changed, but i dunno what.

A fingered/picked bass would be better.
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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby Princess Viscra Maelstrom » Mon Nov 24, 2014 2:54 pm

i actually quite like the slap bass myself, but the other instruments aren't a bad idea. i could change it if more people agree with it.

i was moreso referring to the sound that occurs at around 2:30. some friends i've showed this track to doesn't seem to be entirely fond of the sound that happens there, but i like it. so i wanted some advice on what would need changing here.
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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby Undead » Mon Nov 24, 2014 2:57 pm

Slap doesn't fit the atmosphere imo. The 2:30 sound was... bad. :/
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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby Princess Viscra Maelstrom » Mon Nov 24, 2014 3:15 pm

well then, i made a different version of the same song. slap bass is now picked, 2:30 sound is now removed completely from the song, and probably some other small changes.

edit: changed the song to the right fucking one.
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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby Undead » Mon Nov 24, 2014 3:18 pm

The bass is still slap. :P
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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby Princess Viscra Maelstrom » Mon Nov 24, 2014 3:22 pm

no? it's... wait. fuck me, i'm an idiot, it's the SAME SONG. HERE'S the new version.
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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby Undead » Mon Nov 24, 2014 3:26 pm

Good job. The bass fits in better with everything else now. The rhythm in the intro is interesting, and the ambient noise that kicks off after is really creepy imo. You made a good blend of interest, good sound and creepiness.
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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby Princess Viscra Maelstrom » Mon Nov 24, 2014 3:28 pm

i actually liked the slap bass and weird sound myself, but i guess it's good to get a perspective on things. i DID feel something sounded wrong with the song, so it's only good to get confirmed on exactly what sounded wrong. and i do have the original cut left anyway, so it's not all bad.
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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby agaures » Mon Nov 24, 2014 10:12 pm

Damn nice song! Sounds really good.
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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby wildweasel » Mon Nov 24, 2014 10:38 pm

So, I wrote some more fantasy fiction. Even if nobody has any sort of feedback for me, I suppose I wouldn't mind some acknowledgement that people actually read these things.
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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby Captain J » Mon Nov 24, 2014 11:04 pm

After i read, good stuff. No need to be nitpicky or feedbacky.
Anyway would be great if someone tributes some concept arts for it.
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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby iSpook » Tue Nov 25, 2014 1:21 am

Yeah, it was a nice read... I can't into English all that well, so I can't post feed back that's meaningful.


On topic: Progress has been slow, but I am slowly reaching the point where all the non-special weapons are done and I only have two normal enemies and the bosses to do.
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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby DoomRater » Thu Nov 27, 2014 9:01 am

Dat flash anget tho
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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby Blox » Thu Nov 27, 2014 10:57 am

wildweasel wrote:So, I wrote some more fantasy fiction. Even if nobody has any sort of feedback for me, I suppose I wouldn't mind some acknowledgement that people actually read these things.

"But…but I’m not lying…" The idea of this being the only place she can call home, and that she is about to be thrown out of it, puts Tiva on the verge of crying She stutters out past the verge of tears.

Ah, ah, ah! Show, don't tell!

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Re: The WIP Thread

Postby Sgt. Shivers » Fri Nov 28, 2014 3:07 am

Spoiler:

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/141866421/OTTFX%20doom/OTTFX.wad
I've been messing with an Over the top special effects wad. At the moment it's compatible with anything that doesn't replace the bullet puffs or blood. Let me know what you think! :D
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